The rain falls. It washes away the blood of the fallen.
They are coming. Hordes of them. Too many to kill. To many to survive...
Here I stand. Alone. All have fallen. All is lost.
And yet we resist. Sword meets Shield. Axe meets skull...
I have failed. My King. My land. My Family. All shall die. Just as many died today...
There are to many of them. We cannot win. But we must...WE MUST NOT FAIL
None survived. None...
They are falling back! Victory is near...So close...
We have failed. I have failed...
The Hero Chronicles: Ianril
Scribed by Caldair
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is that a poem? if so its really good i like it very good!
No it's not a bloody poem! It's just a prologue!
oh... well its in poem form! what's wrong with poems huh?!
It's not in poem form! THIS IS POEM FORM:
I am writing a poem
poems are usually lame
This is not a rhyming poem
Poeticness is not my strong suit
Poem, poem, poem, poem
EXACTLY
oh well what's your point to me it looks like its in poem form. what happened to Blade? and nice little comic thing its cute! ^^
Did you forget EVERYTHING Mrs. D taught you? Everything I wrote in that bloody class??? My poems (when forced to write them) generally have rhythm, and THE SAME NUMBER OF SYLLABLES IN EVERY LINE (excluding the poem example)
My poems sound more poetic, and are NEVER in First Person.
THIS is the beginning of a new tale. It is told from the point of view of each main character. You will always be able to tell who is narrating because the name is IN THE TITLE
This is good. What's it about? Me likes. =)
Yes acutually i did forget i dont remember things easy ok well i didnt forget everything but some of the stuff you did i forgot hehe!
Poor, poor Chelsey...
Thanx Kaitlin
well i have a fuw thing to say that was a good poem if you were a 2 year old! and caswalib gitnmj drew and it is not code.
You referring to my example of a poem?
yes
it was weird.... ooohhhh Captain Crunch!
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