As most of you know (Faidor excluded) I restarted my Gambini story. I could use some criticism, to create the best story possible. I want ACTUAL criticism, Kaitlin :), not complements. Faidor, I could use your advice as well, if you felt like giving it.
In other news, today we had the 10th Grade Writing test. This is the first time in the history of my pact with the pen that I have EPICALLY FAILED at writing ANYTHING at least HALFWAY decent. It was horrible. Just making the Perform (Writing) check really killed me, on the inside. I know I failed, there is no earthly way that that piece of crap could have scraped a 3/4. I have failed.
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I'm sorry. I respect all writers and I don't like ripping all their hardwork apart. And it really was good. I couldn't think of anything bad. I'll reread it and leave a comment there if I find something this time.
i'm assuming the one below is the Gambini i hope so i miss Hawkeye!
Sounds fair, like I said, I prefer plot criticisms, not word choice :)
Ah man, sorry its been so long. The hard drive on the computer I was using died...haven't had access to the interweb. Heh.
Where is this story? I want to read it. Send it to me, give me the link or whatever...I will read.
Teachers at school...not all of them, but a great deal of them aren't looking at so much originality or creativeness. They are all about the criteria.
When I read, after the first couple pages and I am still reading because I like and enjoy what I am reading--thats good writing. When I want to know what happens, when I care about the characters, that's good writing.
You can use big words eloquently, you can describe a tree for 8 pages, but if I find myself just reading to get past it, thats no good.
So yeah, let me read what you have written.
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